This is my first shot at poem. I got the idea from a prompt saying to write about something without naming it. I’ve been told it’s good, and I’ve been told it’s not ‘poemish.’ So I thought I’d post it and see what you guys think. Please let me know in the comments! Like, don’t like, could be better, whatever!
M ore of me. That’s all you want, all you need.
O ver all, I’m your greatest desire. Into temptation I lead.
N othing will ever satisfy you more, I deceive.
Evil, I am the root of it. From the Word, take heed.
You, or else, from me, will never be freed.
Has anyone else written any poems? I’d love to hear them! Post a link below!
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