This is my first shot at poem. I got the idea from a prompt saying to write about something without naming it. I’ve been told it’s good, and I’ve been told it’s not ‘poemish.’ So I thought I’d post it and see what you guys think. Please let me know in the comments! Like, don’t like, could be better, whatever!
M ore of me. That’s all you want, all you need.
O ver all, I’m your greatest desire. Into temptation I lead.
N othing will ever satisfy you more, I deceive.
Evil, I am the root of it. From the Word, take heed.
You, or else, from me, will never be freed.
Has anyone else written any poems? I’d love to hear them! Post a link below!
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Riley Rawls is the author of Daisy: The Homeschool Kids, her debut novella. She has been writing for three years, and plans to release more in the series in upcoming years. The 16-year-old, Christian author’s main goal in her writing is to make an impact in people’s lives and glorify God through it. She has been homeschooled for most of her life, and juggles writing meaningful stories, playing her beloved instruments, keeping up with her studies, reading dystopian novels, and playing basketball. She’s a Star Wars fanatic, a fan of Casting Crowns, and a lover of all things blue.
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